Brothers of the Watch: Teaser


Here’s the start of a story I published, unpublished, published again and unpublished again. Someday I’ll get it right and ready for a real run:

“It was the right thing to do, Watchman.”

Shane turned away from the iron bars to raise his eyebrows at his companion, who was sprawled on one of the stained, narrow cots. “The right thing?”

“Killing that fellow.” The boy put his hands behind his head, every inch at ease—or at least pretending to be. “Harris, I mean.”

Shane turned back to the bars, angling himself so he could keep an eye on the boy as well. He didn’t trust him enough to put his back to him.

“Oh, my mistake,” his companion continued, stretching his voice into a mock-proper tone. “You’re innocent, of course. Well, whoever cut his throat, that was a favor to society, that was.”

“On that we agree.”

His companion fell silent. He was young yet—seventeen or eighteen, perhaps. Too young to comprehend the finality of what he was facing.

“Do you think they’ll sell me, Watchman?”

“No.” Shane leaned against the bars, taking an odd sort of comfort from the solidity of them, and savoring the coolness of the metal against his skin. “You clubbed a man to death and then robbed his corpse. Your judges will sentence you to the noose.”

“Huh. Well, I don’t reckon slavery would have been all that much better. Who knows? Maybe you and me will swing right next to each other.”

“We won’t.”

“They ain’t going to release you, just because you’re a lieutenant and all. Hell, I reckon they want to make an example of you.”

A surprising insight, considering the source. “Yes,” Shane agreed. “I reckon that’s true. But I won’t hang. I’ll face the dragon for my execution. You have the right to do the same.”

The boy sucked in his breath. “No thank you. Not me.”

“Your remains will go to him regardless.”

“That’s different. That ain’t the same as offering yourself up to his jaws.”

“No. But it’s more honorable than the noose. Besides, do you know how long it can take a man to die by hanging?”

“I don’t care. I saw Obsidian up close once.” The boy squinted up at the ceiling, as if conjuring the memory. “He was soaring over the city, and I was up on the roof and—and I swear he dove at me like a hawk who just spied a baby rabbit.”

He hesitated, but Shane kept silent.

“I caught a glimpse of his teeth and I—” The boy broke off to shiver. “I threw myself down, flat on my stomach. And after he passed me by, I dragged myself up to my knees and hurled my guts out.”

“Ah.” Shane shifted and stretched out his arms, brushing his fingers against each bar along the way. “Well, the dragon is known to have that effect.”

“Don’t eat before you see him. Don’t take any last meal. You’ll never hold it down.”

Shane let his arms fall back to his sides and then slowly turned back to the cots. The boy was staring at him now, wide-eyed and earnest. For the first time Shane felt a vague bond between them. “Thank you. That’s like to be sound advice.”


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12 Responses to Brothers of the Watch: Teaser

  1. This looks like it is going to be an interesting read.

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  2. J.R. Handley says:

    Is this a stand alone or part of something larger? New books?

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    • Jenn Moss says:

      This is the first scene of a novel I previously published (under a pen name), which I am editing up for a second edition. You’ll get the whole thing here, part by part!

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    • Jenn Moss says:

      Not sure what order this comment will show up in, but this is in reply to whether you could just buy the book now:

      So, here’s the thing. I took down the first edition, but I haven’t finished the edits for the second edition yet. I will probably finish those before I finish posting it as a web serial here. (Looking over my list, I think I’ll be done in a few weeks, at most.)

      I was going to wait to publish it until the web serial was done, but I guess I don’t have to. I can offer it on Amazon for anyone who’d rather have that format or who wants to read ahead, and still keep the faith with web-serial readers by finishing it here.

      I will probably also offer some review copies for free, so let me know if you’re interested!


  3. Interesting introduction! Look forward to the next installment.

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    • Jenn Moss says:

      Thank you!

      I was just reading your post on happy endings and all the comments. Gave me a lot to think about. Not so much for this story, which is already finished, but for the one I have in the works now. (I tend to write mostly happy endings. Sometimes a happy ending with a high cost, but still mostly happy.)


  4. Akaluv says:

    Like the other commentators said, this was an interesting introduction. Your writing flows nicely. Will you be uploading more chapters?

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